Movies in the Park

copyright June 1, 2007, By Maggie O Dear 

Lynda gave the set of instructions to the babysitter for the last time as Michael grabbed the picnic basket, backpack / cooler, and blanket as they headed out the door. “You only need to tell her once or twice about bath and bedtimes, Honey, not fifty!” Michael laughed at Lynda’s exasperated glare. The sun was just setting, hovering over the treetops. Lynda loved these weekly date nights at the outdoor movies the local theater district had set up along the greenbelt on the river running through downtown. It was like being in the middle of the country inside the city. Most nights it was a family date, but Lynda opted for a sitter since it was Michael’s birthday and the kids wouldn’t care for Casablanca anyway. She smiled to herself thinking of the surprise that would be waiting for him when they arrived. It had taken awhile to get most of their friends and family together, and a lot of planning for food and drinks. Her brow slightly furrowed as she glanced at Michael. He’s not a fan of surprises, but he’d love this, she thought.They arrived just as the sun was giving its final glow and disappeared behind the skyscrapers. They found a parking space and unloaded the picnic basket, blanket and bottles of wine, making their way toward the theater area. Lynda spotted Jeff and Amy and a few others as they were claiming their space out to the side, but close enough in to see the screen. Michael looked surprised to see Jeff and Amy out. It was very rarely that they ventured outside of their little cul-de -sac. Lynda saw Michael’s look and giggled. The others Lynda had invited began arriving and congregating around their little spot, all carrying munchies and drinks and a few unexplained bags.

Michael noticed there were too many people they knew in the immediate area for it to be a coincidence. He looked over his shoulder at Lynda with his right eyebrow cocked. Oh God how she hated that look. The back of her neck and shoulders stiffened for a brief moment. She busied herself laying out blankets and arranging the drinks and snacks so they’d be at hand. She and Amy made small talk and giggled at how easy it had been to get Michael and Jeff to fall for this little birthday surprise. Inside, they were both thinking that maybe a surprise might not have been the best idea. Their eyes locked and the chitchat halted.

Michael came up behind Lynda and touched her on the shoulder. Touch might not be the right way to describe the noticeable pressure she felt as he pulled her face in close to his mouth. “Come with me. We’ll take a little walk down the river and be back just as the movie starts.”

Amy stepped out of earshot and sighed as she watched Michael and Lynda head off into the dark. Maybe Jeff didn’t notice, she prayed.

Lynda noticed the backpack Michael had slung over his shoulder. He offered her one of the two bottles of ice water he had picked up. His wife popped the cap off the bottle and stopped to take a deep drink of the cold water. He let her take what she wanted before grabbing her hand and leading her on down the river walk.

“We’ve been through this before, Lynda. Why would you think that tonight would be any different just because it’s my birthday?”

She had no answer for a minute. Taking a deep breath she said, “I thought it would be nice for all of our friends and family to celebrate your birthday. It’s not often that we can get everyone together and the more people I talked to the more we all agreed that a surprise party would be nice.”

“Bzzzzzzt, wrong!” Michael said, shaking his head. “I’m pretty sure you and Amy cooked this one up together. You’ve done it before and it has yours and Amy’s names written all over it.”

“But, Michael…”

Michael tightened his grip on her arm and led her off the walkway down behind some trees, that at the moment seemed as if they had been planted there for his specific purpose. They provided the perfect screen from all the movie goers and were far enough away from the seating area but close enough to the interstate running overhead, that imminent noise wouldn’t be a factor. One of the trees was said to be over 150 years old. A stately, mighty oak, perfect for the task at hand. The thick, low hanging branches were the perfect height for his wife to comfortably hold on to during his surprise for her.

the perfect screen from all the movie goers and were far enough away from the seating area but close enough to the interstate running overhead, that imminent noise wouldn’t be a factor. One of the trees was said to be over 150 years old. A stately, mighty oak, perfect for the task at hand. The thick, low hanging branches were the perfect height for his wife to comfortably hold on to during his for her.the perfect screen from all the movie goers and were far enough away from the seating area but close enough to the interstate running overhead, that imminent noise wouldn’t be a factor. One of the trees was said to be over 150 years old. A stately, mighty oak, perfect for the task at hand. The thick, low hanging branches were the perfect height for his wife to comfortably hold on to during his for her.”I really didn’t th…” she was stopped before she could complete the sentence.

“Right, you didn’t think.” He dropped the backpack on the grass at the trunk of the tree. Kneeling down, he unzipped the bag and pulled out his favorite paddle and her least favorite hairbrush, sitting them next to where she was standing. It seemed as if she had automatically stood right where she needed to be. He put his hand up between her should blades and only had to apply a little pressure to get her to lay herself over the hefty branch.

“Michael, please not here.” Lynda whispered, hoping he would be lenient and let it go. “Everyone will see and hear!”

“No, Lynda, we’re far enough away and the traffic will drown out any noises you find it necessary to make. Bend over here and stay.”

Lynda complied with his orders. She smartly deduced that he was not the least bit happy and any more pleading would only make everything worse.

“How old am I today, Lynda?”

“Forty-four.” she faintly answered.

“Okay then, forty-four to start. How many people did you and Amy decide I wanted at my birthday surprise gathering?”

“Michael, that’s not fair!” She started to stand up but the snap of the paddle on his thigh changed her mind. “Fourteen, besides you and me.”

“Pull your panties down to the middle of your thighs and lift your dress up around your waist.”

Lynda did as she was told, but realized the she would have to hold her knees together to keep her panties from falling to the ground, in turn making her bottom that much more of a target. The last thing she would want on her soon to be very sore rear end were ants or spiders or any creepy-crawly things to hitch a ride inside her panties. Having to keep this position, she found her bottom sticking out further which only brought hot tears to her eyes before Michael even got into position.

“You’ll get forty-four with my best paddle and you’ll take the other sixteen, yes I’m including you and myself in this, with your favorite brush!”

Lynda winced at the thought of both the paddle and the hairbrush. It was sudden, the whoosh of the paddle pushing through the air and the sharp, sharp sting as the first strike was landed. She blinked her eyes and focused on a shrub in the near-by darkness. Over and over they landed. The same spot. Different spots. Full across her fiery bottom. Straight across that agonizing area where her bottom creased into her upper thighs. She tried to keep from yelling out, but wasn’t always successful. Michael hadn’t spanked her like this in many months. Lynda’s head was spinning from the fire across her ass and the thoughts reeling in her mind that everyone would know what was happening.

 

 

Just as suddenly the stinging blows stopped. Michael ran his hands over and around her deep red bottom. The heat from her seemed to cause a glow in the darkness around them. His warm hands on her bottom pushed the heat down between her thighs. Lynda’s head fought to only think of one feeling. It was almost too much to acknowledge her stinging ass and her quivering pussy at the same time. Each one feeding off the other.

“We’re almost done. We’ll just finish up now and then we can go and enjoy the movie.”

Lynda’s knees nearly buckled. “I’m sorry, Michael. I knew I shouldn’t have planned your birthday like this. It just go…”

“Stop! I don’t want to hear the excuses!” He pressed her torso back over the branch.

“But .. It just got out…” She tried to hurry and finish her thought.

“Hush!” The first slap of the brush landed full on her round bottom.

“Itjustgotoutofhandbeforeweknewit!” She sputtered to finish this time.

“I said I don’t want to hear the excuses, Lynda! You’ll get five more before we’re through here.”

By the time the fourth, fifth, sixth blows landed Lynda was sobbing. The lightning hot strokes just kept coming down. Tears were falling onto her sandled feet. She realized too late that her panties had fallen to the ground. Her thoughts were spinning between the tears on her feet and the panties and ants on the ground and the serious fire scorching her ass.

Michael set the brush next to the paddle and backpack. He stood next to his wife, rubbing his hand across her warm bottom. Squeezing each cheek with loving affection. His fingers wandered between her thighs, her lips swollen and wet. He let his finger slide in and out of her slippery pussy. In. Pressing inside of her. Out. In and press. Her muscles clenching around his finger hoping to hold him inside of her. He withdrew from her and landed one final slap on her bottom and gave both cheeks a firm squeeze filled with his craving for her.

“Come here, baby. Stand up and let’s get you straightened up.”

Lynda brushed her dressed back down around her searing bottom and shivered as she thought about the creepy-crawlies that could be all around her. Michael seemed to have read her mind and picked up the panties, dusted them off and put them in his pocket.

“See, now you won’t have to worry about the ants or your panties touching your bottom.” He smiled at her and put both arms around her. She buried her face into his chest and choked by the sobs, turning into small little hiccups as they finally subsided. “I’m sorry Michael, no more surprises without your permission first.” They giggled at the irony of her statement.

Her tears dried, they gathered everything up and walked back towards the theater area. They noticed two people walking towards them on the path. Oh lord, please don’t let them know what happened, Lynda thought. Ohgod, too late!

Michael and Lynda passed Jeff and Amy on the walkway. Amy and Lynda dropped their eyes to the ground as Michael tossed the backpack in Jeff’s direction. “Here, you might need this! There’s water and other uhhh, other stuff inside.” He landed a couple of playful swats on Lynda’s tender bottom and nodded at Jeff.

“You know baby, next time we’re here that low hanging limb back there would also put you in a good position for a little different type of fun!” Michael said into her neck as he pulled his wife up next to him and laughed.

Jeff smiled. Amy shuddered.

 

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Such great stories…. Thanks ya’ll for joining in.  I’ve enjoyed it.  Hope you have too.  We’ll see if anything else comes in.  ;)

 

 

11 Responses to “Movies in the Park”

  1. Paul Says:

    Maggie, I think your story is great as I have already told you. 8)
    Patty, you are bloody fabulous, your drawings fit perfectly.
    It was a brilliant idea and somehow seemed to have made us do much better than we realised we could. Thank you!!! :-)
    Love and warm hugs, :-) :-) :-)
    Paul.

  2. MaggieDear Says:

    Thanks again, Paul! :)

    Whoa! Too cool, Patty! It does fit perfectly! That is sooo close to how I pictured them in my mind. Thanks! *g*

    I’m kinda curious as to Amy’s upcoming situation, and lord only knows what Lynda and Michael will do on their next movie trip! Good thoughts!

    ~Hugs!!

  3. jeff Says:

    Maggie,I loved your story.I love how she was calmly guided out of hearing and seeing range.That reminds me of a few trips to the store where an “escort” outside was necessary.
    Patty,the details in the drawing is what amazes me.The hair on the top of his head,the texture of the tree,the tangle in her panties between her knees.I have no idea how you can come up with a detailed drawing like that,in this contained period of time.

  4. pattydraws Says:

    bPaul your generativity is soooooo special. You can make me do anything… and you were definately there with me in deciding to do this. I was IM chatting with Jeff last week & lamenting that my significant other has been working very long hours and doesn’t seem as inclined to play back with me with short scenarios as he did a little while back. Jeff beng Jeff, told me to smarten up amd even if my bum was lily white, see what I could shake out of the bushes for vicarious red butt fodder… So I suggested I’d draw another picture if he’d write me a good birthday spanking story…. We chatted more, and I decided this was gonna be a very needy birthday…..

    So I invited all of you to join in, put my fantasy up and just prayed some folks would want to join in. Y’all are sooooo talanted. Which I’ve always known by the way. It’s been so nice being able to share it with you.

    There’s a few more days till June 5. Hopefully there’ll be some more birthday scenarios n need of an original drawing.

    MaggiDear I’m so glad they blended with your vision!. Like Paul’s story there were sooooo many possible vignettes I could have chosen to draw from your story, and hey ya know what, now that they’re in my brain, I may just end up drawing another angle/point in time without even knowing why… that’s how powerful you all are…. You own my pencils. LOLOLOLOL

    I’d be privileged to illustrate Amy’s fate and part 2 of Linda and Micheal….. Just lemme know & it’s a done deal. *g*

    Jeff, the 0irmly guided out of earshot scene, real as it is is just to powerful. The details just are Jeff. If I can find an image on one of the few spanking sites I belong to no, & it fits, I’ll try to adapt it. 99% of the time I can find basic position clues in photos, whether they’re recent web images, old dusty personal images, or foggy video stills from my past. Beyond that basic stating point of what you the writer’s draw me through your writing to as the most vivid moment, the drawing grows. I’ve been known to take several photos & blend them & now and then, using your prose, I really just make it up.

    Can’t speak too much for his hair. Her legs were parted… fears about whether her panties would end up in the dirt was moot. Those panties were going to fall to her feet. So what! I love trees. I’ve got many many non erotoc drawings if trees. I just filled in an oak ….

    Hope that helpd.. ;

  5. david Says:

    I am so glag I stopped by. Your drawings are wonderful and the stories are great. I promise to come back again.

  6. MaggieDear Says:

    Thanks, Jeff. :)

  7. ToddnSuzy Says:

    Loved the story… and, as always… the drawing was perfect.

    :)
    ~Todd & Suzy

  8. Tammy Says:

    Maggie that was great!!! The drawing was too!!!

  9. MaggieDear Says:

    Thanks y’all! Now, where are the rest of the stories? Patty’s pencil needs another work out! *g*

    ~Hugs!

  10. Rebecca Marie Says:

    Maggie and Patty,
    The story and the drawing are both great. Maggie, you’ve got a lot of room there for even more stories and just as good.

    Patty,
    You just amaze me with your drawings. There is so much detail in everything you draw.

    Love,

    Becca

  11. tovorinok Says:

    Hello

    Great book. I just want to say what a fantastic thing you are doing! Good luck!

    G’night

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